the WiP pictures are MUCH better than these shots ! these are abit flat and don't do the mini justice. I've been waiting for the finished pics since you posted it on the WiP board
while keeping the better pictures in mind, some comments :
the mini rocks ! your bases are state of the art as usual, they have a great natural feel about them that I am looking to achieve myself
the freehand on the skirt is nice and subtle, but imho you should have continued it on the little patches between her legs or a little bit on her skin, to tie the different parts together.
the face is very convincing. Subtle shading, nice reflection on her bald spot and a scary looking eye
the only parts I don't like is the weapons. You have a very natural colour scheme going and the weapons just seem to blend into it. I would have gone for a more striking colour, or some blue / purple / smoke mixed glazes to give them a more unique feeling. Apart from that I think it's splendid work !