dwarf slayer

[jason]

hi guys heres my finished avatar of war slayer they are nice minis I'm preety happy with how it turned out please let me know what you think
cheers jason

[Maru]

hym it looks like to erly finished

dragon cloack - looks dirty end like a WIP
Red beard lacks of highlights
Gems - they dont shine
- thous are things to work on

but you put a lot of effort in tatoos wich is cool but compard to the lacks mentioned abowe is not breath teaking
if yiou menage to fix thous thing this will be realy cool now is just good end almoust clean

[mahon]

hi guys heres my finished avatar of war slayer

And I think you could improve him a bit.
Just look at this quick sketch of what could be done with his skin:

All I did is a little highlighting and shading.

Click to see full-sized image

[Skrit]

Itlacks some shading/highlighting indeed but it looks like you can make it a very nice one if you do some more work on it.
Also the gems seem to be just the other way around. Take a look at this;

https://www.necrotales.com/necroTutorial ... tonesf.php

There are more tuts like this but this is just a quick find.

[jason]

thanks for all feedback guys looks like i still am not pushing the highlights or shading enough mabye next time
ill be i think you are right those jewels are up sidedown
cheers jason