Well the idea with the blue was that it's a colour assositaed alot with Egypt, it has been suggested that it be better pastil but I am unsure of how to get it there. Adding white just makes it a lighter, perhaps bleached bone?
Thanks for the comments though folks, I love them the idea I had behind them seems to be alright to pull it off. The colour scheme looks a little bland but the idea was to make them not stand out too much compared with some, so it's working. The freehand I'm proud of, even if it's not a consistant size and shape; that needs practice.
I am hoping to do conversions and such for them, mostly on characters and such; otherwise they'll be as they are. I do have an idea for the chapter master but.. that's a long way off. For when I get brave.
KU