Foundry - caesarian centurion

[BlioRay]

this is one of my first models in the 28mm. Colors are Citadel. What do you think about this model? What mistakes?

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[Maru]

Hello ?:)
you are actualy moustli "in lines " wich is good
living your fingerprints on base is not ;P
model is gloosy - have you vernished it ??
if not - paint you use is to thick - more water
other thing is separation - simplest way is black linking end i think that would help alot

Face got a pinkish hue .. dunt know whats exacly is going ther
- how you painted that part ??

o end this big scary eyes

[BlioRay]

Face got a pinkish hue. This is special. I mixed a little flesh and red colors.
After I painted the figure I covered with lacquer for hair. I think that this is not good idea.
Scary eyes. I first draw the eye.
Thank you for pointing out errors. I will try to prevent more.

[Maru]

ther is tech that use Hair spray - but not for sealing minature
ther is a tutorial about Eyes ... how to make them look normal

[arctica]

I agree completely with maru , i think especially for the painters starting off just being neat and distinguishing different sections whether it's by shadows and highlights or by darklining it really helps give a better definition for the model. Plus it's great practice for brush control.

Good start but as maru has said, perhaps a bit too shiny and in some ways looking at the back of the chainmail there is too much paint being applied and perhaps a little too rushed manner too. Just take your time and enjoy the process

Oh and welcome to the forums !

[BlioRay]

Thank you, friends.
The next model will try to do better.

[Maru]

thats the spiryt !!
but dont "try" - just "Do it"