sister of battle

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jason
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sister of battle

Post by jason »

hi guys here is my latest work I did it in 3 nights ( a record for me) it is for table top ,this was my first go with resin for the water it was a bit of a nightmare but i think it turned out ok. please let me know what you think
thanks jason
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przemo
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Re: sister of battle

Post by przemo »

Nice, but there are some elemens you should work on:


-base, the lower part on the back photo is not smooth, looks bad
-genokrads arm from the base is not a good idea for me (looks strange)
-this metal element on the base, with yellow and black stripes is great - the best part of that mini (in fact the mini should be painted in such a good way and not a base :) ) :clap: !
-you paint smooth and clean but with no contrast, there should be a lot more contrast on: black armour, red clothes, her weapon, metal elements and this white helmet; so everywhere
-it's nice that the area near head - most important one - is in different colour: bright white helmet + this fire on top and green eyes make together a nice fokal point :clap: !
-nice purity seals: nice colour and freehands on them :clap:
-one more thing: back of mini is sooooo boring: becouse of lack of contrast on the clothes!

Suming up, you are on a good way. Keep on working :)
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Re: sister of battle

Post by Maru »

well przemo actualy cover it up ..
if you whana c how flat contrast is - just swich your photo to grey scale ;)
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sea.man
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Re: sister of battle

Post by sea.man »

thumbs up for the base idea!
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2011 - 83, 2012 - 38, 2013 - 45, 2014 - 56, 2015 - 95, 2016 - 106, 2017 - 22
Nameless
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Re: sister of battle

Post by Nameless »

przemo wrote:Nice, but there are some elemens you should work on:
yup, what he said :)
not a bad mini, but there sure is a lot of place for improvement. don't get discouraged, just try to use Przemo's advice next time :)
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Re: sister of battle

Post by Demi_morgana »

very necromunda-friendly model... 8)
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