I like her face a lot. and sword too.
on the other hand, hair (2nd pic) look untidy in places. also, some darker shadows would be welcome on that element.
did you want to make her clothes look like a dirty rug? Transitions are pretty smooth (couls be smoother in few places though), but colour you used fit a peasant rather, not king's daughter, even if she's on the battlefield, not in a ballroom

base - green parts look good. Tiles - what should they represent? they look like ceramic roof tiles, but I don't expect her on a roof... Some stairs? they don't look like stairs, they look like few rows of tiles palced randomly.
welcome to CoC

I hope you don't mind my nitpicking. I'm just throwing my thoughts for you to consider
