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need crits for improvment befor i finish it

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Hey! Great work!
Some suggestions:

- the tip of the gun needs to be pointed to the ground a bit more, otherwise it looks unnatural as gravity would make it pretty hard to hold it the way it is.
- the mouth looks to "sweet" for my opinion. Like a soda pop face. Maybe she could use a more worldly-wise expression.
- will she get a chain into her left hand like on the drawing? If not, the hand should be changed into a more lively position.

Cheerio and happy sculpting!

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finished

Wow that is really coming along. The only problem I have with it is that the face seems kinda rough. It that just the pic or are you going to smooth it out a bit more later?

looks damn nice so far unfortunately I cannot disagree about the face

looks great, what scale is this?

I agree on the remarks about the face. I think the eyes aren't that well positioned, but I'll judge this once the model is painted.

165mm tall

and the eyes are a bit off im fixing that

The hair around the face could stand to be a little fuller to match the picture. It looks more "wind blown" in the picture, and a little thicker on either side of the face.

other then what has said already and that I am sure your aware about the neck seems a little thin but that could be the angle of the photos.