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Yedharo's Gaul Bust
Posted: 17 Nov 2008, o 17:18
by Darkmessiah
Hiya guys,
Just working on this guy at the moment, just thought id lob him up and see wot type of feedback i get, i think i know wot needs improving and wot id like to add but, am not hugely experienced when it comes to skin tones so your advice/critique will be really appreciated!
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RE: Yedharo
Posted: 17 Nov 2008, o 20:08
by ToMaZ
You need more highlights. After that is done you might need some more shading (depending on contrast) and you can use colorglazes after all the highlights and shading to smoothen it out and make the skin more interesting.
I like the bust and I'm looking forward to see how this develops

RE: Yedharo
Posted: 17 Nov 2008, o 20:37
by mahon
ToMaZ is right - highlights are really needed there. I'd add some yellowish or bone colors to the highlights to keep them warm colored. Maybe some cold colors in the shadows?
Now it's looking very promising but but it's pretty obvious it's still early WIP and many layers need to be added for great effect.
You're going in the right direction...
RE: Yedharo
Posted: 17 Nov 2008, o 20:45
by Demi_morgana
cannot add anything more

waiting to see updated pic!
Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 07:23
by Darkmessiah
Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 10:17
by Nameless
shadows are bit too dark, imo. it would look good on a zombie, but not really on this guy

eyes, lips and wounds are

Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 10:26
by ToMaZ
You still need more highlights. I would bring it up to an offwhite color, like Ivory. After that I'd use thin glazes of a blue and a reddish brown (and maybe more colors) to bring some color into it and smoothen it.
You might also try to paint some scars or bodyhair.
Something about the eyes is weird... but I can't put my finger on it

Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 12:22
by Skrit
The wounds came out great.
@ToMaZ: I think the eyes look a bit weird-ish because the eyebrows are not done yet. Think they'll come out nice once the brows are painted.
Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 12:25
by Demi_morgana
you did great job on the eyes - they are very hmmm eyecatching
Posted: 20 Nov 2008, o 15:29
by Darkmessiah
@Nameless - I think ur right, i havnt actually been back over them with my basecoat so ill do that when i work on him next
@Tomaz - ill look at brightning the highlights that are their, unfortuantly the pics dont show that the highlights are alot brighter, but ill defo add some more.
As for the eyes, its prob cause their not a realistic colour (and theirs no eyebrows yet of course :p) and this is supposed to be a realistic mini. ill look at adding some scratches, as for the hair, am planning on making him blonde, would blonde chest hair stand out enough to be painted?
Cheers guys!