Neolis' Wip

Post by **Demi_morgana** » 22 Feb 2009, o 09:41

the wall is far too plain for me - some skratches, dirt, weathering, bulletholes, poster - whatever! will make it look mich more interesting

Neolis · Post by **Neolis** » 22 Feb 2009, o 18:35

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Need the minis done before the posters can be made.
Though is it more interesting now?

Post by **Nameless** » 22 Feb 2009, o 20:28

much better

I can't decipher most of the grafitti. Perhaps that's because I'm not a native speaker, perhaps you could make them more legible

Post by **Demi_morgana** » 22 Feb 2009, o 21:08

yeah, much better for sure!
but I'd still prefer to see some dirt on the wall

Post by **Skrit** » 25 Feb 2009, o 13:53

I can decipher some of the words Phil: dream, go home killers and the last opne I'm not sure but maybe it's hero.

Post by **Nameless** » 25 Feb 2009, o 13:59

go home killers & dream is over

Post by **mahon** » 25 Feb 2009, o 14:50

yep, that's what they seem to be...

Neolis · Post by **Neolis** » 25 Feb 2009, o 15:31

Sorry guys I have been running crazy here. It indeed it go home killers
Dream (graffiti on other side too) with in the red spray can some one wrote "is over" under it. Their is also a half erased peace sign and anarchy symbol. I will go back over them tonight and see if I can't make them pop a bit more. I also been washing the ladder on the one side and side walks to give them a more lived in feel. Though no sign of the kid mini yet so this all may be for nothing.

Dragyn · Post by **Dragyn** » 25 Feb 2009, o 16:30

Nice work going into the base. Maybe a little more dirst and a torn poster/billboard of some kind. I like the soldier so far, but needs a bit more smoothing on transitions. Hope your mini gets to you soon.

Wraithlord · Post by **Wraithlord** » 25 Feb 2009, o 20:54

The base is looking good to me but I have to say that I feel the face of the model itself needs more attention. As it stands it looks very flat, lacking any definition. Also, the gun needs to be slightly darkened in the recesses as well.