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Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 1 Sep 2012, o 02:34
by huitzilopochtli
Painting yellow... Any thoughts?

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Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 1 Sep 2012, o 16:30
by Lastman
The triangle in the middle of his waist, beneath his backpack, seems to have a highlight in a part that would be in shadow: I'd just keep the highlight on the upper edge. If a backpack will be added, that part of the robe might not be hit by light at all.

For shading yellow, try mixing in a bit of purple, the complimentary color of yellow.

Looks very smooth so far.

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 2 Sep 2012, o 15:11
by huitzilopochtli
Purple...ish. Not sure how it goes with the yellow, though. Sorry for the poor pics, good camera is gone again.

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@Lastman - thanks, will see about fixing the triangle. I was using some purple to shade but I overdid it. I'll be trying again in a day or so. Any suggestions on how much purple to use? Normally when blending I'd go from colour 1, mixes of colours 1 and 2 approaching colour 2, to pure colour 2. Seems a bit silly to go to pure purple from yellow...

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 2 Sep 2012, o 22:09
by Lastman
Ach sorry I should have been more clear. You just need to add a tiny bit of the complimentary color to "desaturate" it--that is to make it a shade. What you will be seeing is a darker yellow, not purple.

For example, if you were using black and white, you'd add a tiny bit of black to the white to make a gray. Add more black to make a darker gray. But you do this with yellow and purple instead of black and white.

Part 3 or 4 of this video by Romain covers shading.
-->www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLPg2stVh34&NR= ... =endscreen

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 21 Aug 2013, o 01:30
by huitzilopochtli
So I'm hoping this will be an entry for GD. I know it's not my best, but here goes.

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There's still many hours work to do, but I'd like some advice on improving the NMM gold. Any help?

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 21 Aug 2013, o 13:54
by Demi_morgana
The pic is way too small but the paintjob is smooth and clean.
I definitely like it - worthy GD painitng contest! 8)

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 26 Aug 2013, o 10:36
by Nameless
looks flashy :) can't really say much, pics are too small

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 17 Sep 2013, o 00:41
by huitzilopochtli
Thanks for the comments guys. Sorry about the photos. Stuck using my phone. :(

Anyway, hopefully these will be better. And something else I'm working on. Let me know what you think, particularly Eowyn's sword. :)

Also, these pics are exaggerated in their brightness. Will get some in natural light tomorrow.

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Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 17 Sep 2013, o 08:22
by sea.man
The tzeench sorcerer is competition level :clap: Freehand is great, but a bit how to say it - alone, or maybe looks like copy pasted not the integral part of the cloack. Do you get the idea what I mean? Maybe adding more symbols around would help it.

Eowyn's sword needs more work, blend the color transitions.

Re: I Want to Improve My Painting

Posted: 17 Sep 2013, o 11:01
by Pandadosmares
Looking very good, Eowyn's just needs more work with transitions