Thanks folks!
The lenses on Nemo are actually silver. I had them a pink/red color (can't imagine why

), but the person painting the rest of the army didn't like them. So I did black frames with silver lenses instead. It did improve the contrast of the facial features.
I made Caine's armor darker because I was told that Nemo's armor looked a little too light for this person's taste. Go figure. So I kept it darker... I don't care for it as well as Nemo's but its not my army. I agree the backpack thing was a quick, messy job. I ran out of time and energy Wednesday night. It looks a little better live, but it could still use plenty of work. Oh, well. Its free - how much can they complain? I loved his coat/cloak, but then had to put the big, clunky sword on top of it.

I hate the sword, but there it is.
I meant to go back and add some lighter brown highlights to Eiryss's armor but just plain forgot. (Did I mention it being late?) I appreciate the advice of what to do with the edges of her face. I had no clue what to try. Next time I get a similar problem I have an idea.

I was just happy I got her eyes to be fairly decent.
Nothing is based because the person doing the rest of the army is doing all the bases to match. Unfortunately the minis were already attached to the bases, so I had to live with it.

Oh, well...
Thanks for the tips, folks. I'll hopefully put them to good use in the future.