Little Jimbo
you havent used full spectrum of light you got dark tones end mid tones - wich make for highlights in your case - you are missing uper part of light - so actualy Highlights

blade looks good - but without light on it in for of actualy neer white colors end whit in "WHITE" form such as bliks of light it looks like stone blade or like militray grade "smoke" steal
as for this hairs of his .. ow .. thats awful sculpt actualy .. but yu mey always ad bliks of light on hairs - just rymember how it look on real hairs (this thing is not a random placment )
rymember Anime like hairs - somthing like that
DAGabrie
a next hobgoblin

upper blade got badly placed light bur lower 1 looks much better in terms of light (detailing left a lot to improve but this time is about light .. )
hym .. i would like
Mahon help with this explenation ...
whenever is light ther is darknes so if you aplay light in 1 place you should aplay shadow in oposite if you applat black you shoud applay also piure white to balance things
end in case of such curved blades ther isalso reflection from the ground (in case of B/W painting it is another source of light - musch sufrer then the "zenital" 1 as it is just reflected light from the ground - but it is )
BTW - Hgoblin hands looks better on this 1
end back to blades - this white separation betven blade end eedhe part - it should be realy thiny - made with side of a brush instade of tip
ok somthing to think about
Works of "Noimic" AkA Static painter / Nomad Painter / Vesa
looking at his work wach cerfuly how strong light is on them end how he work with difrent materials - lether shine , black painted metal gun - shines on borders , when Cotton shirt just merly colorize due to zenit light when whit nylon shirt create strong end sharp contrasts
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yes thet color works but with all knowled needed to create a B/ w wersion - whole spectrum of light used from darkest to brightest with preserving helthy dose of base color a 50% end 25% & 25% for shadow end lights
end this yuo mey c atthis At43 minis - if you desaturate photo thous will be as 3D as they are now
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