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Neolis' Wip
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Re: Neolis' Wip
by Nameless » 5 Jul 2012, o 10:02
Neolis back again 
I like the freehanded pattern on the shield.
white highlights under scratches on the shield are too thick. dark lines represent damages (like after being hit with a weapon), white lines represent light on the edge of scratch. if these two lines are of similar thickness, it looks unnatural.
face - darker line around whites would make him look less scared the skin shade looks too earthy imo.
brown armour - transitions could be smoother.
good too see you painting again
I like the freehanded pattern on the shield.
white highlights under scratches on the shield are too thick. dark lines represent damages (like after being hit with a weapon), white lines represent light on the edge of scratch. if these two lines are of similar thickness, it looks unnatural.
face - darker line around whites would make him look less scared
the skin shade looks too earthy imo. brown armour - transitions could be smoother.
good too see you painting again
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